Little Pink 2

 I editted this and the previous art I uploaded with an Adobe Lightroom. I have no idea how to use it. I'm pretty sure it's not exactly made for this, but there isn't a photoshop on this computer

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 The pose is a bit weird,b ut I actually kind of like it.Nevertheless anatomy tips suggestions are always welcome. My biggest problems are: he hood and her hair. How would you go about drawing those?
 I am thankfull for any kind of feedback

pencil, black and pink pen, eraser